Journalism at Bucks (2024)

Headline Writing

So you'veedited a news story forgrammar,AP Style, content and so on, and arelaying it out on the page, or about to upload it to your website. Now comes one of the most interesting, challenging and important parts of the editing process: writing a headline.

Writing great headlines is an art. You canbang out out the most interesting article ever written, but if it doesn't have an attention-grabbing headline, it's likely to be passed over. Whether you're at anewspaper,news website orblog, agreat headline (or "hed") will always get more eyeballs scanning your copy.

The challenge is to write a hed that's as compelling, catchy and detailed as possible, using as few words as possible. Headlines, after all, have to fit the space they're given on the page.

Headline Size

Headline size is determined by how many columns the hed will run across, the size of the font being used, and how many lines it will be. A one-line hed is what editors call a "single deck," two lines is a double-deck, and so on.

So a 2-36-2 headline designation means it will be a two column, 36-point, two-line headline. And 3-48-1 would be a three column, 48 point one-line headline.

Headlines can run anywhere from something small - say 18 point - all the way up to banner front-page heds that can be 72 points or bigger.

But whatever the length, the headline should be the best one possible within the space allotted.

(Unlikenewspaper pages, stories on websites can, in theory at least, be much longer, since space is less of a consideration. But no one wants to read a headline that goes on forever, and website headlines need to be just as catchy as ones in print. Indeed, headline writers for websites useSearch Engine Optimization, or SEO, to try get more people to view their content.)

Here are some headline-writing tips to follow:

Be Accurate

This is most important. A headline should entice readers but it shouldn't oversell or distort what the story is about. Always stay true to the spirit and meaning of the article.

Keep It Short

This seems obvious; headlines are by nature short. But when space limitations aren't a consideration (as on a blog, for instance) writers sometimes get verbose with their heds. Shorter is better.

Fill the Space

If you'rewriting a headline to fill a specific space in a newspaper, avoid leaving too much empty space (what editors call white space) at the end of the hed. Always fill the specified space as best you can.

Don't Repeat the Lede

The headline, like thelede, should focus on the main point of the story. But if the hed and thelede are too similar the lede will become redundant. Try to use slightly different wording in the headline.

Be Direct

Headlines aren't the place to be obscure; a direct, straightforward headline gets your point across more effectively.

Use Active Voice

Remember theSubject-Verb-Object formula from newswriting? That's also the best model for headlines. Start with your subject, writein the active voice, and your headline will convey more information using fewer words.

Write in Present Tense

Even if mostnews stories are written in the past tense, headlines should almost always use present tense.

Avoid Bad Breaks

A bad break is when a hed with more than one line splits aprepositional phrase, an adjective and noun, an adverb and verb or aproper name.

Example:

Obama hosts White

House dinner

Obviously, "White House" should not be split from the first line to the second. Here's a better way to do it:

Obama hosts dinner

at the White House

Make Your Headline Appropriate to the Story

A humorous headline may work with alighthearted story, but it most definitely wouldn't be appropriate for an article about someone being murdered. The tone of the headline should match the tone of the story.

Know Where to Capitalize

Most newspapers use "down style" headlines. "Down style" means that only the first word and proper nouns of headlines are capitalized. In "up style" headlines the first letter of all major words are capitalized.